You have provided a proficient understanding and analysis of your ancillary texts, explaining what decisions were made and why, explaining where ideas were taken from, and how you came to a final decision. However, you need to explain why elements used are conventional or not of the indie genre.
You need to: 1) Explain how elements use conform or subvert the genre 2) Include pictures to support your points 3) Elaborate on why you think your final products are successful in appealing to your target audience
You have provided a proficient understanding and analysis of your ancillary texts, explaining what decisions were made and why, explaining where ideas were taken from, and how you came to a final decision. However, you need to explain why elements used are conventional or not of the indie genre.
ReplyDeleteYou need to:
1) Explain how elements use conform or subvert the genre
2) Include pictures to support your points
3) Elaborate on why you think your final products are successful in appealing to your target audience